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Author Topic: Scan and adjust ... a couple of oldies  (Read 758 times)
sandeha
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« on: August 31, 2005, 03:16:00 PM »

What with the rain and the price of diesel, I spent an hour checking through a few older negs.  Both these had originally been printed by the local print-lab of the time and then cast aside.  The labs had applied the usual auto-everything, so with the full frame scans I've also gone auto on colour and contrast.  

The gargoyle was shot in the early afternoon of a hazy day and overexposed.  I was stretched out in the only position possible between the protective fences and used a cheap 35-80 zoom at max to get what I could.  Converting to bw cuts down the apparent haze a little, and some tweaking with the tones and contrast makes more sense of the image.  Or so I like to think.  What do you think?




1.  1998 Notre Dame Gargoyle (cropped and toned)


2.  1998 Notre Dame Gargoyle (35mm full frame)



The river scene was shot on a dull day (typical Devon, UK :-( ) and underexposed.  The only lens I had was a 50mm and I was standing of some sort of mooring, which meant it was likely I would have to crop the final image.  A little burning, toning, and sharpening has helped, but has it helped enough?  And do you think a 4x5 ratio really works for the bridge?



3.  1983 Mr and Mrs (4x5 ratio)


4.  1983 Mr and Mrs (35mm full frame)

It's great when you can use the full neg space and frame the shot as final, but even with a range of focal lengths to hand that's not always a practicality.  

Any thoughts on any aspect you'd care to mention?  Fire away.
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« Reply #1 on: August 31, 2005, 04:35:40 PM »

that greyscale crop of the goyle is fantastic!
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« Reply #2 on: August 31, 2005, 05:27:37 PM »

The color gargoyle has a certain cheap postcard charm.

I would crop out about half the sky in both the river shots.  That directs more attention to the principal interest, which is the swans, but still retains the echoed duality of the figures.  Both are nice compositions.
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« Reply #3 on: August 31, 2005, 05:33:12 PM »

I like the 4 x 5 crop of the bridge. The main features are the half-moon shapes of the bridge and the clear reflection in the water, nicely complemented by the two birds and the two humans.  

I would say that the 4 x 5 crop is just right.  The only adjustment I would dare to suggest would be setting the bridge top line square with the horizon. The image would also be nice even if you crop the two humans, leaving the dark mass of the bridge (no sky above), the crescent opening, the reflection and the birds.

As for the gargoyle, I find the BW version a large improvement over the color one. Nice composition and eye! What is that gargoyle thinking?
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« Reply #4 on: August 31, 2005, 08:34:35 PM »

I like the B&W of the gargoyles.  The bridge pic looks better to me when it is rotated to the right about 1.8 degrees. That straightens it up, and I like that. (Fussy technician, me)   The 4X5 crop is fine to me, with a little less sky.  If I knew how to post a pic, I would. ...but I saved that one!  Cheesy

Nice pictures.

Jack
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« Reply #5 on: September 02, 2005, 02:06:09 AM »

Glad you like them.  I did wonder how much sky I could afford to chop out above the bridge figures.  I didn't rotate the bridge on account of the verticals, though it might have been right to do 0.2 or 0.3 cw to avoid an optical illusion - the walkway does incline.

It's impossible to take a shot like the gargoyle without the influence of a greater work bearing down ...



(I don't have a better reference for the image, but this will do - http://www.churchill-society-london.org.uk/1945JFMA.html)

I suspect that as I took it I probably figured that it would be no more than a postcard shot without some serious work on it ... (80mm lens, Fujicolor 200 ... thank goodness for PhotoShop :wink:  )
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