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Andrea
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« on: November 03, 2005, 08:48:26 AM »

This is a bit of a favourite photo of mine recently. Please do critique. [gently]
http://www.flickr.com/photos/30505166@N00/58666714/
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« Reply #1 on: November 03, 2005, 10:22:33 AM »

I left you a comment of flickr, but it's a great portrait.  All your photos have such wonderful, smooth tones to them.

Do you print and scan prints, or are you using a Photoshop-ish program?
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« Reply #2 on: November 03, 2005, 11:33:06 AM »

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I left you a comment of flickr, but it's a great portrait.  All your photos have such wonderful, smooth tones to them.

Do you print and scan prints, or are you using a Photoshop-ish program?

KirkT, the Kowa 6 is a medium format camera. That helps a lot.

Andrea, lovely available light portraits. I like environmental portraits, showing people in their work. The only thing I would like to see, is to lighten it up a bit more. There's a lot of detail in the shadows, not all of it useful or even desireable, but I think the equiv of about 1 stop brighter would be nice.
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« Reply #3 on: November 03, 2005, 11:49:23 AM »

Andrea, did you ever see the portraits Chris Clunn did with a Hasselblad around Smithfield meat market?  Carry on like this and you'll match him point for point.
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« Reply #4 on: November 03, 2005, 01:21:31 PM »

THANKS FOR this everyone. The pictures on flikr are scanned negs. I either print on a r1800 or else play around with POP.
As for some Photshop programmeish, I have Elements 2 so will lighten them up a abit.
Thanks again Much appreciated.
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« Reply #5 on: November 03, 2005, 02:03:04 PM »

Love it!!  Your portraits are A+.  There is something about available light b&w portraits in an urban setting that strike a chord with me.  Great job.
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« Reply #6 on: November 03, 2005, 02:56:29 PM »

At the risk of boring you lot silly, can I ask you to spare a momen to look at this other image of Paula who works as a cleaner a the Velodrome and  comment on it please. It's slightly lighter then the other one.

http://www.flickr.com/photos/30505166@N00/59473533/

many thanks in advance
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« Reply #7 on: November 03, 2005, 03:46:45 PM »

Good closeup without looking too "setup".
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« Reply #8 on: November 03, 2005, 04:43:39 PM »

Yeah, lighter is better.  I like the second one a lot, Andrea.  Good stuff!
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« Reply #9 on: November 03, 2005, 05:06:27 PM »

Both are very fine portraits that capture wonderful light and expression.  I think the first one suffers a bit from downsizing and jpg compression.
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« Reply #10 on: November 04, 2005, 01:28:24 AM »

Andrea, very fine portrait with such a calming and serene atmosphere. I also like 'Princess Victoria-How do I look?' with the cycling helmet...
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« Reply #11 on: November 04, 2005, 03:34:19 AM »

I still like the first one better, but I'm a sucker for heavy contrast.
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« Reply #12 on: November 04, 2005, 04:20:25 AM »

Thanks all. Victoria "how do I look" is Ms Pendleton - World Sprint Champion !
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« Reply #13 on: November 04, 2005, 05:34:01 AM »

You have become an excellent environmental portraitist.
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« Reply #14 on: November 04, 2005, 08:00:26 AM »

Thanks Xen,
I shall use Environmental Portraitist [or should that be Portraitiser?] as a handle on my name :-)
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